8:30

8:30

A Poem by VenusFaire
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It just came out of my head

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Ohbrahma rattle on.
The caldera has split the fences.
Lifted veils, now come to your senses.
Dear princess, rather priestess,
You have spoken your peace into existence;
Your plot to launch, of your land on which you plan to build a rocket�" but, oh. Stop it.

Nobody wants no line drawings, nobody wants no line drawings no more from some smooth talking yester-w***e.
Ya better give em scripture, they want statues, something to clap to.
If they ask for sculpture give them oil
Slammed into Lennon,remind the children the lanolin is kosher.
I remember somebody told me about Kobe
The very same day somebody told me I should fall into the ocean then hear
I go again, I’m sorry see, it’s fine,
It was just the wind. Just the wind.
It was just dust in the wind, nothing but dust...
I learnt myself on the smellin salts before I knew how to walk, hit several walls, started creepy crawling, now I am here running

© 2020 VenusFaire


Author's Note

VenusFaire
Don’t gotta have a soul to be a ghost

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I like it. Great line breaks. A Kobe reference. All the corners are painted. You give just enough for the reader to work with.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I also spend a lot of time with stray humans and inherently confused animals. You're borderline objectively creepy... you know that, right?

Posted 4 Years Ago


I don't know, I think this means you really want to make spaghetti in oil at John Lennon's house at 8:30. ;-)

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on September 3, 2020
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Tags: arts, experimental, free form, stream of consciousness

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VenusFaire
VenusFaire

Fairbanks Ranch, CA



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Twenty something. West coast. Epileptic cat. more..

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A Poem by VenusFaire