Your Eyes

This is lyrics that I wrote a few days ago. It could probably still need some editing. Suggestions are encouraged.

The world turns to ashes
as I gaze upon the stars.
The fire burns right through me
as I walk along the cars.

I feel no pain, make no scream,
as it burns through my core.
And, As I stand here looking at you,
my heart begins to soar!

Chorus:
Cause when I'm with you
the pain ceases to exist.
And you thrust me
right out of the abyss.
And my whole body
is filled with butterflies.
As I'm lost within your eyes.

Alone I walk these streets
with a big smile on my face.
Cause I know inside my heart
that you'll come back to this place.

I hear your voice, within my mind,
as the rain begins to pour.
And, As I stand here listening to you
my heart begins to soar!

*repeat chorus 2x*

The pain inside,
can not compare,
to my feelings I hold for you.
And when I look at your eyes,
I realize,
that my heart belongs to you.

Cause when I hear you
my problems begin to untwist.
And you lead me
right out of the mist.
And my whole body
begins to tremble inside.
As I'm lost within your eyes.

As I'm lost within your eyes...

Reviews

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Beautiful, I really loved it. I could feel the music behind the words. A great write.