Three

A brief love poem, to a very special someone.

I go with Grace, and she with me,

The world makes us a trinity.

The jovial cosmos shakes our hands.

It walks along beside.

 

Our looks are double, thoughts are squared.

The universe might be impaired,

But by our providence it stands

Tide after starry tide.

 

No blasphemy is this, no sin;

We glorify the gods within.

We sow our seeds in solar lands,

With earthy blossoms pied,

And every fruit bears sugared moons inside. 

Reviews

[N.Sevilla]

Beautiful poem with lovely rhythm!

[emipoemi]

¡Bra-vo! Bril-liant! Well done!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This poem is very beautiful and sweet. And I wish your relationship all the best. :-)

Kaze~

[VennelaMargame]

Thank you, kindly.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Tks]

It is wonderful to see love depicted so wonderfully in words that are enriched deep in meaning. I wish you all the best in your relationship

[Da Leigh]

This paints a picture of a very, happy-go-lucky relationship. Very pleasant read.

[VennelaMargame]

Thank you. The most important thing is to be fun friends together, I think.

[Muse]

Well there you go. You found your Muse. Keep her close to your thoughts. Your creative spirit will thank you for it in the end. Beautifully written my friend.

[VennelaMargame]

Thank you, kindly. I've told her that she feels like my Muse. I hope we can inspire each other to good works.

[Muse]

Well if I were you, I'd share this poem with her. Trust me, girls like that kind of stuff. :))

[VennelaMargame]

Oh, believe me, she'll know about it. I'm also working on composing a sonata. Not really dedicated to her, but rather because she makes me want to cultivate my creativity and work ethic.

That, however, is taking much longer. And when it's finished, I'll need to find an orchestra free for a jam session so I can record it for her. Oh, well...