To Cope with Grief

To Cope with Grief

A Poem by Theodore Velvet
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When I die

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After I die, here is a plan
to aid you in managing grief
Upon reading this, place a ban
In your minds, make thoughts of me brief

Burn every word ever I wrote
Let not the future's children know
Wrap my memory in death's coat
Forgo my views to the wind's blow

For all of us emerge as aught
Humans are not timeless as stone
Timelessness by no one is bought
Dust becomes of spirit and bone

But if you must reminisce, remember the bad times only
Remember not feeling bliss, so your heart cannot be lonely

© 2015 Theodore Velvet


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I simply love it. Have you ever wondered what life would be like after you've left it behind? I wonder this all of the time. Who will miss you? Who do you want to miss you and who do you want to forget you. Its a very reflecting and selfless piece. I also love the rhyming scheme. Keep up the good work and I hope you stay inspired.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Theodore Velvet

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad that you could relate to the sentiment that inspired me to write this. The feed.. read more



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"Remember the bad times only" this more isolationist take on coping with death is really original take and im glad it wasn't the same old story well done, hats off.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Theodore Velvet

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you picked up on the distinction: this is a reflection of a more immediate reac.. read more
I loved reading it..!! Continue the good work..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Theodore Velvet

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
I simply love it. Have you ever wondered what life would be like after you've left it behind? I wonder this all of the time. Who will miss you? Who do you want to miss you and who do you want to forget you. Its a very reflecting and selfless piece. I also love the rhyming scheme. Keep up the good work and I hope you stay inspired.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Theodore Velvet

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad that you could relate to the sentiment that inspired me to write this. The feed.. read more

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Added on February 1, 2015
Last Updated on February 1, 2015
Tags: Grief, Coping, Maturity, Death

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Theodore Velvet
Theodore Velvet

Montgomery, NY



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Theodore Velvet is an aspiring new writer. His talents include reading, writing, and giving a f**k. His work is for those who care to take a journey within themselves and find the darkest substa.. more..

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