Erotic S&M Haikus

Something new...

Blindfold and tease me

Suffocate me til I scream

Bite me til I bleed 

 

 

Slightest touch of pain

Fingers grip leathers pleasure

Blush red swollen flesh

 

 

 Paint me with your sin

Whips and chains tickle my skin

Hardcore S&M

 

 

Make me beg and plead

Breathe your naughty deeds to please

My sexual needs

 

 

Strap me to your bed

Handcuffs placed tight, hips hungry

Feed… my fantasies

Chamber of passion

Masters deep dark desires

 Spanking obsession

 

 

Submissive female

Declined wishes of climax

Withering in hell

 

 

 Mistress of the night

Engaging In slavery

Enraging delight

 

 

 Kiss her stilettos

Bend over and beg for more

Pure sought out torture

J.Cruz

Author's Note

Just trying to see how this would work in Haiku form...

Reviews

[Amy Bumpas]

There are some really great lines in this: Blindfold and tease me

Suffocate me til I scream

Bite me til I bleed





Slightest touch of pain

Fingers grip leathers pleasure

Blush red swollen flesh





Paint me with your sin

Whips and chains tickle my skin

Hardcore S&M
Make me beg and plead

Breathe your naughty deeds to please

My sexual needs
This is rough, raw, indeed a pleasure...

[kalmest]

Ok dont look down. He turns his back to her as he knows she hs produced that devlish smile again.

Paint me with your sin

Whips and chains tickle my skin geniuse girl

Oh by the way you busy tonight?

[Jibey]

The form works well - and the content is deeply erotic...stirring the imagination into pictures that arouse, disturb and please

[Melobldnfr]

Certainly nice form and good read. Thanks.

[Larry Dyson]

very well I would say ...good ones...
love this one
"Slightest touch of pain

Fingers grip leathers pleasure

Blush red swollen flesh"

[biggerthenu]

you really nailed this one in haiku and it really has a nice flow and it was very clear sweet write

[Inyourshadow]

Kiss her stilettos
Bend over and beg for more
Pure sought out torture

my favourite stanza bar none no pain no pleasure lol. This is how Haiku's should be treated, abused and made to beg. Keep em' coming

[bob, small b. aka invs]

interesting use of the haiku form. nicely done.

[Felipe]

interesting read, veru erotic lol kinda suprised lawl, good work

[Plagued Monumentally]

Beautifully written. You captured my interest at the very first line.
Keep writing you!