White

I'm slapped

I see the sun

scratching this heavenly body

my porcelain body

Now it's bad luck

I've had horrible service

I'll remember myself

Taller than anything else 

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

I love the word porcelain for some reason. It's just so descriptive. Nice work with this piece.

[lenabean]

I don't know how to interpret this. Whatever it meant to you when you wrote it, I really like the feeling that it gives me when I read it. I feel like I understand it on a level that my conscious mind hasn't quite caught up to yet. Anyway, I really like this. Keep writing, and welcome to WritersCafe! :)