The Dreamer

The first one without sad thougths :D

He's a dreamer,
a lovely piece of art.
The only bright spot for her,
with a heaven in his heart.

His eyes, the rainforest in Marrakech,
that feeling when she sees them,
always new, warm and fresh.

He dreams, and he charms.
Even the daisies go red
in the warmth of his arms.

Oh, there's nothing in this world,
that she wouldn't give up, that she wouldn't miss,
There's nothing she wouldn't give
for one moment of his sweetest kiss.

Everything else in her eyes would blend,
the world around her come to end,
when she'd land down in his hand,
when she'd enter his Dreamland.

Author's Note

It'd feel so much better if I dedicated it to someone (:

Reviews

[Acer]

Well written, that someone'd feel happy when he'll read your this poem. loved your last phrase,
Everything else in her eyes would blend,
the world around her come to end,
when she'd land down in his hand,
when she'd enter his Dreamland........

Nice words, liked your words too.

[Velida]

Thank you :))

[Acer]

Awesome

[MichaelsLyric.com]

What a beautiful love poem. This piece melts the heart. The images are exciting, like taking a trip around the world. Great write. Thank you for being creative, in such a lovely way.

[spiritwind]

This work absolutely charmed me.
I liked this in particular: "His eyes, the rainforest in Marrakech,"
that is a truly fresh image. Well done!

[Velida]

Thanks a lot :D

[Nithin Purple]

The dreamer is a nice poem::)

[Velida]

Well, I had the most beautiful inspiration for it :D
Thank you :)

[17thWhitePrince]

Very sweet indeed !!!

Awe the warm cherished delight that is Love
and to be with the one we Love the most !!!

[Velida]

thanks :D
huh, I love the feeling love, but being with one I love... that's not gonna happen :/.. that's why I'm writing poems about it :D

[Seamstress]

Gads, do I know this feeling so very very well. My soul has left this world but he is forever within my dreams.

[Black Rose]

Nice poem!

[Velida]

Thanks :D