It's Christmas time!

It's Christmas time!

A Poem by Velida
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I dedicate this poem to my friends all over the Universe. And, I don't celebrate Christmas,I'm a Muslim. :)

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There's something I want to say;
Life is a rough game to play.
Yet,it brings precious moments like this,
so let's try to spend it in love and peace.


It's Christmas, darling, spreadin' it's glow,
Oh,look,the God has blessed you with snow!


Get up early,
don't be lazy,
Look,the linden is all white,like a daisy.

Eat much chocolate,
and get chubby,
no one will care,
you'll still be lovely.


Life goes fast; comes and goes,

So, go out there and use those mistletoes!



I'll shorten this poem to a clear review:
MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL OF YOU!



© 2012 Velida


Author's Note

Velida
I just have to say:
Helga,I didn't have your address to send you a gift, so I came up with this kind of gift, which will find a real address, in your heart. I love you, and thank you for picking me up when I was on the bottom. ♥
- And one heart for Lora,too. ♥
Everyone here who celebrates Christmas, Merry Christmas and have nice holidays! :)

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Nice package i think it is. I loved it indeed. Loved a little stanza that is

Get up early,
don't be lazy,
Look,the linden is all white,like a daisy.......

Even me too don't like to wake to up "early in the morning" ":-'')
But now i think i should follow your this pretty stanza. Thanks to awake me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Velida

11 Years Ago

Thanks :D
And for the awakening- You're welcome , haha :D
Acer

11 Years Ago

My pleasure :-''), now i'll try to wake-up early morning, thank's.



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Nice package i think it is. I loved it indeed. Loved a little stanza that is

Get up early,
don't be lazy,
Look,the linden is all white,like a daisy.......

Even me too don't like to wake to up "early in the morning" ":-'')
But now i think i should follow your this pretty stanza. Thanks to awake me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Velida

11 Years Ago

Thanks :D
And for the awakening- You're welcome , haha :D
Acer

11 Years Ago

My pleasure :-''), now i'll try to wake-up early morning, thank's.
Merry Christmas and happy New Year!!! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Velida

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I won't explain again that I don't celebrate Christmas :P
You have a nice New Year,.. read more
Nikky Miles

11 Years Ago

It's okay if you don't celebrate. I understand, it's not like we're on different planets. Just be ha.. read more
beautiful message! and altogether endearing to our hearts, great job, happy new year to you also!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Velida

11 Years Ago

Thank you :D
Oh, I really do love this since I agree with you. Christmas is the time of the year where we share smiles and laughter. Life goes by too fast, so we need to cherish little moments and memories. Life's a hard game that we won't ever find the list of instructions for it either. But when the holidays come around we forget how hard life is and through on an ever-lasting bright smile. It never fails, whether you're young or old, you'll wake up on Christmas Day. I always have chocolate maybe since Santa Claus knows I'm a chocolate freak! Hehe :) The only thing I noticed that might sound better is if you didn't put 'the' in front of God. It makes it seem too wordy in that line. I hope you had a Merry Christmas! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Velida

11 Years Ago

Thank you. And, I had I nice Christmas, I ate so many Christmas cakes and had a beautiful night with.. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

11 Years Ago

That's good that you had a great Christmas. So did I :) I didn't know that. I guess that I didn't re.. read more
Very very cute.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Velida

11 Years Ago

thank you :)

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