Surely You'll stay

Surely You'll stay

A Poem by VeeTrix words
"

I found someone, but not sure of my feelings

"
It's told it's not true love
because we're to young,
but it can't be true because
I'm in love.

The memories hide its place
inside my beating heart
but is it the place to hide
I'm in this place.

Surely You'll stay because of me
because we're not to young,
but it can't be true because
We're in love.

© 2013 VeeTrix words


Author's Note

VeeTrix words
Some drafting, had to put a little feelings. Sorry for the unemotional poem. Critique for the final?

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Added on July 21, 2013
Last Updated on July 21, 2013
Tags: love, not sure, I don't know, stay, feeling

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VeeTrix words
VeeTrix words

Thornton, CO



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Hello fellow scribes (: I prefer to be called Vee! Everything that I'm about will be told in my writing and if any questions on meaning on my poetry, do ask! I also want to head in the career of art s.. more..

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