There's a Girl

There's a Girl

A Poem by {Rated Vee For FAMOUS}
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ok the two guys start off not looking at each other, just talking, at a sub station. and the first one to talk is a young man, and the second one is a middle aged, Jaded type

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"So There's A Girl"

"Isn't There Always?"

"and shes My World"

"The Way It Goes"

"But What Am I TO Do?"

"I'm Not Sure I Follow?"

"There's A Girl"

"Where's This GOing?"

"and She's My World"

"Are You OK?"

"And When She LEft...

This Door Appeared...."

"Should I CAll A Doctor?"

"and I Went Through It..."

"Oh God Your Bleeding"

"And this beautiful Angel AppeareD"

"SOMEONE CALL AN AMBULANCE!!"

"And She Says To ME 'Love Is The Life."

"HELP!"

"I Say To Her, And When Ones Love Dies?"

"Stay With Me Buddie, You'll Be Ok..."

"She Looks AT Me, A pity In Her Eyes."

"So Much Blood, WHERE IS EVERYONE!!!"

"She Tells Me That Love Goes On, As Does Life."

"Shhh, Save Your STrenght"

"I CAll Her a Liar, For Look AT Me.

Love Is A Lie, When THose YOu Love DIe"

"Oh GOd..."

"I Make A Mockery Of Love..

aDn She Who Loved Me

BUt I Hope The DEvil Is a Miser...

ANf I hope HE's A SAdist...

For There Is No Way TO cause  a Worse Pain...

Than Living In This World...

With Out The World..."

"Thank God Your Here HElp US!... "

"Oh my  Poor Lover,

Your PAth So Broken"

"What!! He's Dying. HELP ME!!!"

"This to Shall PAss,

And When You Pass,

I Promise You,

You will Endure,

For Hell Itself cannot procure...

The Soaring of a Heart in Love

The Pain Of a Heart In Mourning

Nor THe sorrow Of Seeing Every Mistake...

Those Horrid Mistake That Lead You THere...

And TRust My Lover,

There Is Where YOU shall REside

While the Love so Slain

Shall Look Apon You In Disgrace..."

"Lady Are You MAD!? THIS MAN IS DYING!!"

"To Not Fight Like She So Beleived...

You are A Coward..

But So Brave...

And For Your courage, 

You Shall REceive...

The Love That LEft YOu

One LAst TIme....."

"God, Lady, what's Your Issue...!!!"

"...."

"He's Dead..." The man turned to berate the lady for wasting valuable time that could have saved this young man....

only to see nothing,...

he looked back at his lap....

to see nothing but blood, but the body was gone...

"Love is Life...

And I Never WAnt TO Die"

he heard on the wind...

he stood as the subway came to a screeching halt at the platform...

".... Dont... die.."

 

© 2008 {Rated Vee For FAMOUS}


Author's Note

{Rated Vee For FAMOUS}
i know it hard to follow.... sorry but thats how its sposed to be... and i love it....
REd is the young man, Blue the Angel/ Lover, And Black is the older one....

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You're right. It's is hard to follow. It does have a deep meaning. I enjoyed this one a lot. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Word To your mother... and let that word be... VEE!!! i love to write and i love to Read and i draw a bit and all that jazz. My superhero identity is Nonconformist-Sock... and my arch enemie is Stain .. more..

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