Listening

poem

I’m listening. Although I am alone and there’s nobody here. 

Not a single sound in the room. 

Paradoxically listening, it’s a quiet conversation, 

since there is nobodies quietness to listen to. 

The dialog inside goes to the depths.

And although it may sound as empty as black. 

Stars are emerging and beams of clarity

fly towards me as fast as light.

I’m having a conversation with the universe.

Author's Note

Reviews are most welcome. But I'm a beginner. Please be kind. Thank you.

Reviews

[Hogwarts]

This. Is. Awesome. I love how the last line is just like BOOM there you go. I feel like, instead of using imagery, you somehow managed to use... soundery? Haha, I hope that makes sense. Like I can feel and hear the silence . Keep it up :)

[Vectoria]

Thank you so much, Hogwarts You're feedback is highly appreciated! Yes, you're right, the poem is very auditory. You're very observant, thanks :)