For You (Ghazal)

I am tired of living, but am alive for you,
I wish to bid adieu, but I survive for you.

I tread towards you- another direction,
the four directions become five for you.

I loathe bees, but if you wish for honey,
I will love to attack a bee-hive for you.

Your ambrosial fragrance bedecks
those places where I arrive for you.

Vatsal's heart rests with you, my love,
if I die then I would revive for you.

Author's Note

Read and review. Criticism is always welcome.

Reviews

[Happy hours]

Pure dedication to love or for someone close to you.
Awesome writing...
Cheers :)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

Thanks for your review, friend.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Love is truly magical......
great attempt............
beautiful emotions........
i liked it!!!
:)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

Thanks for the review.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome.....!!!:) :)

[Country boy183798]

Love can be the strongest motivation and driving force known to humans. It can drive us to do the impossible! This is a very sincere and and a beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing it.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

Thanks for the kind review, friend.