The Silent Girl

This one is about not judging a book by its cover. About not making assumptions before knowing someone and their back story.

Her eyes were the ocean

With raging waves that fight

A battlefield inside her mind

Where all the unsaid words lie

And then her heart

So full of love

But guarded by walls high

Those lips of hers

Never uttering a word

For the battle raged on

In the loud mind that no one heard

'The Silent Girl' she was called

But little did they know

That her eye said it all - 

She was trying to find herself

Author's Note

My first poem I like!! Yay!! My dumb self can do it!! Or can I? Only you can tell me, so please do! Thanks for taking the time to read!!

Reviews

[Layla Fairchild]

Are you sure this is your first? It's too good to be a first. I love it. I want to have a go at poetry but I don't think I'll be that good. I think I'll just stick with story writing. I guess I like it so much because I can see myself in it. This is so good for a first time.

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

Oh, I used to write (rubbish) poems 4 years ago. This is the resurrection of my dead poet.
I'm so happy you can connect! Thank you so much!
Believe me, you can do anything you put your mind to. Just give poetry a chance. Then you can decide whether you can write them or not.

Thank you for taking the time to review!!

[Diamond Dunbar]

This is beautiful and very delicate as well as well written! I do intend to read more!

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

Thanks in a million!! Such reviews are the reason I write. I'm extremely happy it worked for you, because your works are masterpieces. Thanks again!!