Ode to the lost Facebook Friend

Ode to the lost Facebook Friend

A Poem by Varyar

You like me on your profile, 
You see that im not so vile,
except when im talking about how i hate your style. 

you unfriend me and i am alone again,
 left to search for another friend...

© 2011 Varyar


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lol Facebookers are a finicky bunch and they don't take criticism well. That's why I only talk to people that I actually know on Facebook. And by the way Varyar you can do much better than this and we both know it. Try again my friend and that your teeth into it. see you on Conan

Posted 12 Years Ago


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The rhyme and meter seem unsophisticated; your disregard for capitalization and cliched end of an ellipse don't help this.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 20, 2011
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