Under the Tree

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So here we are

on patch of green

Under stars

we've never seen

Something we

could not forsee

Yet here we are

and want to be

A tiny breeze

moves us by

Caressing with

a silent sigh

I catch your eyes

you see my soul

And in this moment

I feel whole

So here we are

not what we seem

For all this was

another a dream

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful poesy! First stanza is my fave but the whole thing is nice!

[Vargo]

Thank you very much, glad you liked it :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're very welcome!

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

After reading I really like the line:
"Under stars
we've never seen" because it has all the more meaning when it turns out to be a dream. Your use of "another dream" adds to the feeling it gives me. I think of star crossed lovers, or how stars align, etc.
Very nice!
"

[Gee]

That's one of those dreams that you never want to wake from, and when you do the day starts with disappointment. Lovely flow to this.

[Vargo]

Yes, it was a good dream. Thank you for dropping by :)

[Gray]

If only it could be real. Dreams show us what lies inside our mind when desire dominates our thoughts. Take out the a in the lat line.

[Vargo]

Yes if only.. thank you for your comment.

[angelface79]

I really like this. It's catchy and its strong. Keep it up

[Vargo]

Thank you for your kind words.

[angelface79]

No problem