Blood Tear

something dark

Now cry me some blood

I want to see you suffer

I want you to scream

Now feed me your heart

I will consume your life force

I will eat your soul

Now breathe it all out

I need to carve out your dreams

I need to cleanse you

So now you are mine

I have everything you need

I have your essence

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Quite an intense read this is, my friend. I believe I may have some gooseflesh now, because it conjures up demons from my past. Not sure how you meant this to be read, but my experiences take me on certain paths that have been dug from some rather ugly times. Abusive people, possessive people, jealous tyrants are like this. When you have seen someone's eyes turn black, abandoned all you thought mattered, and run, then you do indeed shed a "blood tear". I am fortunate, not all are. You have written this so well, and it packs an amazing punch. Please take the review as a compliment. I am not always moved to expose my past.

[Vargo]

Thank you so much for your words and honesty. It does mean a lot to me.

[Ghost]

Very intense i would say, but a bit too dark.

[micahd]

rah, this is quite dark and deep, and yet these are thoughts that are so famaliar

[Vargo]

Thank you Sir for your comment and dropping by.