Dream
A Poem by
Vargo
Poem Prompt for Blue Rose Cafe contest
A whisper
Let me breathe you in
Let you be a part
of something you
have never been
A dance
Let us sing
I'll lead you through
Just follow
The heart
The pulsing dark water
Do not faulter
You're almost there
I'm right here
In the lake
Grab my hand
Come awake
© 2016 Vargo
Author's Note
Inspired by Bryan Lee Brown - "Dream" from his album "Sonic Highways"
https://open.spotify.com/track/7Ia5uehj8pGydsHWmqMQRm
Reviews
Greatly inked,
keep it up Vargo!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thanks Amy :)
8 Years Ago
welcome there. :)
"The pulsing dark water
Do not falter
You're almost there"
This part was what really grabbed at me, almost seductive in it's tone. Loved it. I look forward to reading more of your work
Posted 8 Years Ago
"The pulsing dark water
Do not falter
You're almost there"
This part was what really grabbed at me, almost seductive in it's tone. Loved it. I look forward to reading more of your work
8 Years Ago
It was indeed meant to be seductive and I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your comment :)
Lovely Vargo.....a wonderful contribution to my challenge. Thank you for joining in the fun!
~ Helena ~
Posted 8 Years Ago
Lovely Vargo.....a wonderful contribution to my challenge. Thank you for joining in the fun!
~ Helena ~
8 Years Ago
Thank you, I'll keep trying to write some more for the contests.
8 Years Ago
You are welcome. And yes please write as many poems as you like!!!
beautiful poem!
lovely music!
Posted 8 Years Ago
beautiful poem!
lovely music!
8 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words :)
The gentleness and sheer beauty of this is amazing!
"A whisper
Let me breathe you in
Let you be a part
of something you
have never been"
It is haunting, and kind, and loving, and on and on. Truly, your work touches me so deeply.
Posted 8 Years Ago
The gentleness and sheer beauty of this is amazing!
"A whisper
Let me breathe you in
Let you be a part
of something you
have never been"
It is haunting, and kind, and loving, and on and on. Truly, your work touches me so deeply.
8 Years Ago
Thanks for inspiring me to write more :)
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Added on March 28, 2016
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