Life is Play
A Book by Mikael Malmberg
 Dividing it up into chapters so I can get them attention. :D  © 2013 Mikael Malmberg
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Chapter 2 is out. Surprised that the therapist wasn't attacked? Don't worry. There is an explanation for everything. It'll all come together, in the end. Also what do you think of the different sizes for the texts? Is it good or bad?
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A thoroughly enjoyable read. At first I thought it was disjointed with no clear flow of plot. But that immediately disperses after the diary entries. I like that fact, that the story isn't entirely obvious, until the end.
One grammatical error: "The smell of incense lied heavily in the air." It should be 'lay'. [...I think. Stupidly difficult verb.]
I look forward to reading more.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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A interesting read. I like the thoughts and places you took me. Good to free flow your poetry and thoughts and see where they end. Thank you for sharing the excellent story.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks, Coyote! I will be posting more in the next few days, I have been busy with school but also b.. read moreThanks, Coyote! I will be posting more in the next few days, I have been busy with school but also been working on chapter 2.
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A thoroughly enjoyable read. At first I thought it was disjointed with no clear flow of plot. But that immediately disperses after the diary entries. I like that fact, that the story isn't entirely obvious, until the end.
One grammatical error: "The smell of incense lied heavily in the air." It should be 'lay'. [...I think. Stupidly difficult verb.]
I look forward to reading more.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Lovely piece. I loved reading this. Keep up the great work
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you! I will!
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11 Years Ago
You're welcome
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Added on September 6, 2013
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Mikael MalmbergHelsinki, Helsinki, Finland
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I write on-and-off, but writing is a permanent interest for me. There's never going to be a time when I won't be interested in the art of writing, the arrangement of words, their style and rhythm and .. more..
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