Bittersweet Lust

Haha, I think it's pretty good, but I've always sick and twisted.

We've been broken
Shattered to dust again
I've tried holding on too close
While I ignored you
But I cried, begged and longed for you
I just couldn't turn my head.

- Your bleeding and screaming so tempting
Your tear glazed eyes so blue
I just wanted to stab in deeper
As you groaned your beautifully lustful tune.

- Your begs make a melody
Your quivering body my symphony
The thought of your torture as you cry
A tragic finale to my lullaby

- Your writhe so magnificent
You shouting "No!" as I smile
Your denial only encourages me to sink in farther
Blood so bittersweet
The scent bringing me to my knees
Can't control the shaking and quivering
Finally stop!

-Your terrified eyes are now empty
The pulse I heard now resting
And in your ear I whisper softly
" That is what you get for falling in love with a vampire
Now together we take our last breathe."
The knife so cold inside me,
But so merciful it let me die.

Author's Note

Edit it, review& criticize.

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Pretty dark and dramatic. I like the blood lust and the violence, showing a vampire who isn't afraid to kill. Nice job.

[CherryBomber96]

Wow. That is kind of dark. What i am seeing here is a love for killing or the killing of a lover or the loved. Am I close?