Blessing or Curse

This is a song I wrote for me and my cousins. We love writing songs and dream of having a band. Yea, like THAT'S ever gonna happen! Enjoy!

Verse 1
   I'm staring out my window
      holding the rose you just gave to me
   Thinking about our years together
      and what others always see
   They're standing on the outside
      looking through the glass
   Staring...Laughing
      is it worth it?

Bridge
   I can't leave your side
   Your the one always on my mind

Chorus
   You pull me in
      You pull me out
   We kiss and hug
      but what is it all about
   We are shunned by are parents
      our classmates are worse
   So which one are you really
      a blessing or curse

Verse 2
   I try to explain to them
      that we are fine
   They say we are too young
     that it's fake but your still mine
   Mine alone
     and I belong to you
   While they are staring...laughing
     is it worth it?

Bridge again

Chorus again

Verse 3
   No, I won't do it
      I don't care anymore
   It's you I care about
      It's you I adore

Chorus x2

Ending (No rhyme)
   oh your wonderful
      of course your my blessing
   but it's them that bug me
      I can't escape them
(yeah yeah oooh)
   I love you, I said it
(oohh oh oh)
   Blessing or curse

Author's Note

Good? Bad? Which is it? Suggestions are good too!!! If I made mistakes, let me know!!! ^_-

Reviews

[Lauren]

1.Love it! 2. Makes you think 3. Did I mention I love it?

[Hotel Mornings]

This is good but you have to watch for typos. For example, I think you mean thinking instead of thanking in the line: "Thanking about our years together" and you're instead of your in the line, "Your the one always on my mind." Everyone has typos but it's always nice getting rid of all the ones you find. There's a strong message behind this. keep on writing!