My Grudge For You

I'm not the type of person to hold grudges

I'm not the type of person who'd get mad easily

Nor am I a person who's actions are controlled by hate

Whenever I see your face

Whenever someone mentions your name

Whenever I hear your voice

Or even when I think of you

I'm filled red with rage

Rage so strong,

Rage so black,

Rage so pure

The strong urge to hurt you

To hear you yell in pain

To make you see how it hurts

To be treated like crap

I won't forgive you

No matter how bruised your knees are

No matter if you'd lose your voice

Kneeling, apologizing, begging,

It won't work

My heart, my being, my soul

It's filled with dark hate

There's no more space

To forgive you

This is my everlasting promise

This is my eternal vow

This is my black grudge for you

Author's Note

I came up with this after I cried a couple of hours for my sister. This is not for her but for her half-brother, my step-brother who's a brat.

Anyway, all type of reviews are welcomed. Especially if it has something to do with my grammar. Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[~*_Michelle_*~]

It went all flowy until you added "Crap"
Crap is an adjective, but a very weak one. Maybe you should try using a bit more adjectives that have a stronger feeling, and meaning to it.
Also, hate got very overwhelming. Hate hate hate hate. We heard that often, and we kinda got the point. Adjectives...
Some of this poem was all too blunt, and left me just sitting saying "Yup" Not thinking... Just saying. Oh. This is something called hate...Shes experianceing it... Cool, cool. Not "Oh gosh. What is she saying in this piece of writing" Usually blunt poems are very... uninteresting.
Also, maybe you can describle things in a bit more detail...:/ Just a suggestion.
Otherwise this was an interesting piece to read. I can tell that this step-brother is a pain in the a*s...Haha