Parallel Doors

Lately, I’m driven to answer a question.

I might be onto something,

Like the exuberant professor that struggles to find

Sanity.

 

I have a theory,

Structured with a fixation to know

So that I’m not oblivious like the generations that burned

And battered

The hub of time.

 

I smoke a lot of f*****g weed.

But I’ve also pushed my mind’s boundaries,

Swam the depths of bottomless oceans

That taught me how to live for myself.

 

Now,

Equipped with the passion

Of a love being taken away…

I’ll still dig deeper

Watching the structure built by those before me

Fall away as the poles are rearranged,

I’ll still endure the consequences of freedom.

I’m still eight steps away,

Waiting behind but a layer of drywall for him.

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

Now,

Equipped with the passion
Of a love being taken away…
I’ll still dig deeper
Watching the structure built by those before me
Fall away as the poles are rearranged,
I’ll still endure the consequences of freedom.

Wow! Pretty powerful stuff here poet, really enjoyed it. Thanks for posting it.
Antonio

[Broken.]

Aww how cute, I do adore this..
I'm sure you'll find a way.. We always do (x

And yet I still await your call...

[Kat]

Vannie Lou this is so you. XD But, at least things may be easier because he knows; don't let it bother you love.
Its always so hard to review what you write when I know what's already behind it; because I know you. hahaha

And I know that in the end it'll work out.
Ight nignog??

Keep on pushing those boundries because the day you stop may be the day the world ends for real. XD

Loveeee, Kaiteth
& Happy Birthday, see yo a*s in a bit. ahaah

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

A journey of truth through the eyes of another. It surely was an interesting point of view. We all must seek our own truth. You will soon enough be showing lost people the way...