for you, whatever YOUR name may be

for you, whatever YOUR name may be

A Story by Vanessa

I know a certain fellow who was curious, some time ago.

He gave me rain and flowers, it made me beam and glow.
Sometimes words are hard to place,
But I know of splendor in his terms;
I find that benevolence is bliss.
That’s not easy these days,
If I may say.
 
All that I mean to say, though
Is thank you.
For . . . . words can make me smile.

© 2008 Vanessa


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Aw - a sweet little statement for us all to share with that someone. :)
I love reading your work, you always bring something new to the world of writing. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


I love it. I like the way the words are pieced together carefully.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this. The flow is nice and I like your vocabulary. I'm a brat for words so I can be picky sometimes. This is one I'd pick.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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