Suffocating

I stand still.

No air.

Fight for my future,

But life isn't there.

I grab the silence,

Tickle the emptiness.

There is no one in the room,

but an empty bottle of forgiveness.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Carissa]

i love the unpredictable rhyme scheme, and the last line literally made me stop and stay "woww." Looking forward to more of your amazing work.

I like it a lot, short and sweet. Looking forward to more of your work.