That Day

At a time, you go around
your thoughts I will not know.
Some point in life, I tried to do
found out it wasn't right
For me to say how it is
how it's always been.
And now it seems you've gone away
Life's short, fulfill your days.

Reviews

[Van]

For now, I shall write for myself. You shall understand what comes of my words and interpret them in your own way, not where I come from, if you must.

[mess of gorgeous chaos]

I agree with the other two. Lovely poem, but unclear.

[Vartan Haghverdi]

Well written, but like reviewer Ethan Paz said, it is quite difficult to understand where you're coming from.