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A Poem by Raven Dye
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This is me....my heart my life story..

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My eyes are blind
My mouth can't move
My mind cant pick
witch side to choose

Love or lose?
Life of death?
Wake for ever?
Or my enternal rest?

Blood or water?
Pleasure or pain?
I am just slightly mental?
Or completely insane?

The choise as mine
Forever I am..
No longer a saint
Or blood from the lamb.

I'll thrist forever
Until i feed
The thirst will grow
And so will my greed...

Forever i'm here
The world is mine
I'll hide in the dark
Until the end of time...

© 2009 Raven Dye


Author's Note

Raven Dye
In a way...i think we have all been in this position...

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This poem is so beautiful! I can see all the emotion you put in it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is really, really well written. You did an excellent job of getting your point across.
"I am just slightly mental?
Or completely insane?"

I like that.
Thanks for sharing! This was an awesome write.

XxStaySweet,
Rina

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 13, 2009

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Raven Dye
Raven Dye

Bluefield , WV



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My writing name Raven Dye. I've been threw a lot in my life so far. I'm 16 years young. Im constantly thinking of new poems and stories and most importantly lyrics. Comments are allowable. I dont car.. more..

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