The kingA Poem by Raven Dyelol this is some pretty random crazy writing one of my reviews says to be more random so im gonna practice here. tell me what u you think!I sit reading my poems what the hell is wrong? Im not really angry you have it all wrong. i feel a sence of falling i hear a great band i fell in a F*****G HOLE like alice in wonderland the trees were blue the sky was green the grass was red this is not what it seems. HOW MY GOD A RABBIT!! i follow him threw the wonderous land youll find this is true the houses were warped the music constantly screamed this is my kind of place i looked and i leaned the gravity was light i floated with gleeeee my body so strong here i am free the people were nice dressed in all black not one miss place brick not even a crack the smell was awsome like my grandmas old home then i see a tower and i see a throne the world was perfect here your care free but as i looked at that throne something not everything was at ease. i walked to the throne there sat a "king" laughed and guestured while his audience sings "Praise the king praise him well priase him now...or go to hell" My stomach flipped That was not god!! This world of full of peace was nothing but a fraud. I talked to a man asked him why he said" the king came from the sky" "He promised us peace He swore to us love He even cured our sickness He's the one from above" I looked at the man wondering eyes "That is not God..." I wanted to cry. The kinds made them dance sing of his praise. He enslaved the people and servents he raised. He constantly bloated of his good wellfare He cussed and cursed without anycare. I ran to my hole... jumped right back threw that world was fucked UPPP! I crused and i threw (books lol) No matter how peaceful a land may see youll always have that one person who acts like that "King" © 2009 Raven Dye |
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Added on October 12, 2009 AuthorRaven DyeBluefield , WVAboutMy writing name Raven Dye. I've been threw a lot in my life so far. I'm 16 years young. Im constantly thinking of new poems and stories and most importantly lyrics. Comments are allowable. I dont car.. more..Writing
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