The king

The king

A Poem by Raven Dye
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lol this is some pretty random crazy writing one of my reviews says to be more random so im gonna practice here. tell me what u you think!

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I sit reading my poems

what the hell is wrong?

Im not really angry

you have it all wrong.

i feel a sence of falling

i hear a great band

i fell in a F*****G HOLE

like alice in wonderland

the trees were blue

the sky was green

the grass was red

this is not what it seems.

HOW MY GOD A RABBIT!!

i follow him threw

the wonderous land

youll find this is true

the houses were warped

the music constantly screamed

this is my kind of place

i looked and i leaned

the gravity was light

i floated with gleeeee

my body so strong

here i am free

the people were nice

dressed in all black

not one miss place brick

not even a crack

the smell was awsome

like my grandmas old home

then i see a tower

and i see a throne

the world was perfect

here your care free

but as i looked at that throne

something not everything was at ease.

i walked to the throne

there sat a "king"

laughed and guestured

while his audience sings

"Praise the king praise him well

priase him now...or go to hell"

My stomach flipped

That was not god!!
 

This world of full of peace

was nothing but a fraud.

I talked to a man

asked him why

he said" the king

came from the sky"

"He promised us peace

He swore to us love

He even cured our sickness

He's the one from above"

I looked at the man wondering eyes

"That is not God..."

I wanted to cry.

The kinds made them dance

sing of his praise.

He enslaved the people

and servents he raised.

He constantly bloated

of his good wellfare

He cussed and cursed

without anycare.

I ran to my hole...

jumped right back threw

that world was fucked UPPP!

I crused and i threw (books lol)

No matter how peaceful

a land may see

youll always have

that one person

who acts like that "King"

© 2009 Raven Dye


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Added on October 12, 2009

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Raven Dye
Raven Dye

Bluefield , WV



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My writing name Raven Dye. I've been threw a lot in my life so far. I'm 16 years young. Im constantly thinking of new poems and stories and most importantly lyrics. Comments are allowable. I dont car.. more..

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A Poem by Raven Dye