Deal with the devil

you going to take it?

running threw the night

then i begin to freeze

the world was crashing down

and i just fell on my knees

the world was dark and dim

i had no idea what to do

my heart is pounding now

the pain suddenly grew

looking down i see a puddle

not water,tears nor sweat

reddness bleeding threw my clothes

the puddle was now a threat

trying hard not to lose control

i hear a laughing sound

"ill save your life" someone says

but nobody was around

"if you make a deal with me

i promise to save your life,

no more pain,or damn regrets

no more feeling strife."

but if you dont ill let you die

then will you feel alright?

wont it be fun to live some more

and make a deal with the devil tonight?"

'I REFUSE TO TAKE THE DEAL

LEAVE AND LET ME DIE

NO BODY WILL EVEN MISS ME

AND YES ILL FEEL ALRIGHT"

the darkness was getting heavey

the pressure was pushing down

the world was going quite

to this body my feelings were bound

the pain was to intense

he wouldnt let me go

"one last chance to take the deal

i think you should do it ya know"

on that night i went to hell

for i yes to the deal

if you dont belive in it

you MUST belive its real

now im locked in this world

gathering many souls

i must reach and sertent amount

to reach the devils goal

heed my word you must beware

the night can really kill

but so can the devil

if your willing to make a deal

 

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very dark but witty not to mention poignant in relation to the world today... if you compromise yourself to get what you want you will not be happy because you will have lost the real you. Awesome write.