heartbreak

your world went black

you could not see

the air was still

u could not breath

it took away

your very soul

the one u love

u cant let go

it made u sad

it made u cry

it makes u ake

u want to die

do u know what it is?

the curse of  this

that still lives?

have u felt this very pain?

this hell on earth

this acid rain?

have u felt so very mad?

u have it all?

more like u had....

its better to love

than never loved at all?

its better to jump than it is to fall?

if this is ture why do u love?

why do u jump?

why do u fall?

ive never felt this so called pain

but it will hit me

like acid rain

and when it does

i will fall

and ill cry to top it all

i can see

some may cant

i will jump

while some will dance

i will fall

while others cry

i will feel heartbreak

while others die.

 

Reviews

[kakie]

I think this is a very well written poem that flows. I love the simile "it will hit me like acid rain"!