crash test dummy

crash test dummy

A Poem by Raven Dye

Dont get to caught up in yourself girl.

The day you fall in love is the day that the world crashes down.

I find it kind of serious and intresting the way you make your move.

One hand down his back and the other holding a gun.

So dont hold your, keep it up.The sparks are yet to fly. Dont give up the future is only a game...

You said you'd never love again.When never said the words.Pushy Pushy i must admit .That day you finally gave in.

I find it kind of intresting the way you make your move. But seriosly girl just give up.

 The day you fall in love if the day the world crashes down.

© 2009 Raven Dye


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Grammatical errors confusing. Your first line is too small. Needs consistency. use a different color background or font. Other than that it was okay.

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Added on October 12, 2009

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Raven Dye
Raven Dye

Bluefield , WV



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My writing name Raven Dye. I've been threw a lot in my life so far. I'm 16 years young. Im constantly thinking of new poems and stories and most importantly lyrics. Comments are allowable. I dont car.. more..

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A Poem by Raven Dye