unique angel

unique angel

A Poem by Raven Dye

Careful for shes fragile

Be easy with her heart

She is a fallen angel

She loved him from the start

She fell so fast

This is true

Unable to be caught

"I'll just hit the ground."

For that is what she thought

Emotion drips constantly

Anger is nothing new

Capability in her hands

The love for him had grew

The angel was so hurt

Her wings torn and attacked

Unique and so different

              The angel dressed in black

© 2009 Raven Dye


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That was sad, but beautiful.
I think the flow "limps" a tiny bit in the middle, but the rest was perfect!
I like it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


this was nice. It flowed well and read beautifully. The only thing is the red is a little too bright.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on October 12, 2009

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Raven Dye
Raven Dye

Bluefield , WV



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My writing name Raven Dye. I've been threw a lot in my life so far. I'm 16 years young. Im constantly thinking of new poems and stories and most importantly lyrics. Comments are allowable. I dont car.. more..

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A Poem by Raven Dye