Forbiddin Love poem/story

Forbiddin Love poem/story

A Poem by Raven Dye

On her cloud so high above
An angel sits and waits
For her love
to return to the golden gates.



Listen very closey
to this tale she has to tell
and heed the warning
about an angels love for hell

her love for him
And his love for her
Ment changeng what they believed

so the angels they once used to follow
had to tuff it out and leave

Different worlds
Burning and Peace
So far very away
She couldnt stand to be apart
But still she cired and prayed

"Dear lord i love him dear.
Help him change his ways,
No one deserves to be
in a place where the nights are burning days."

Down below the boy looked up
and saw the angel cry
A pain filled his heart
but he knew he couldnt die.

He watched as the angel took a knife
to cut out her broken wings.
He saw her fall to a place called earth
as her blood fell in ribbon like streems

He wanted out to catch her
But he was to down below
He tricked the devil and told him
"I'll make the angel die if you let me go"

The devil grinned and laughed
The boy was now on earth
he ran to catch the angel
before she hit the dirt

She cried as he held her in his arms
She looked in his eyes and said
"I love you but i wont go back
i'd rather have you instead.'

The boy began to cry for the very
first time his in life
He kissed the angels lips
and took away her knife

"I love you to but you need God
more than you'd ever need me
Ill change my ways just for you
and in Heaven we'll both be."

He prayed to God to forgive him
for the awful things hes done
"Please let me come to heaven
To be with the ones i love."

God heard the pleed
to let the boy be with him
If the boy promises to live a life without sin

The boy agreed to follow God
He said he'd try his best
but the angel was to return to heaven
Until his final rest

He kissed the angel bye
and said "I'll be back my love."
Now the angel waits
On her cloud so high above.

 

 

Heres what the  poems about.  An angel love a boy very much and of course shes a christian and hes a devil woreshipper. So, she wants to be with the boy so much she cuts out her broken wings witch resembles her life in heaven and glory towards God. When she falls down from heaven the boy see's her and knows that if he dont catch her she'll get hurt cuz on earth...stuff like that happens. when u fall u get hurt...mentaly, emoitionly, and phyicaly.

 

When he tricks the devil and the devil agree to let him out he catches the angel and there now together...but not for long.

When she tells him she want to be with him he thinks back to how horrible hell really is. and how he had that pain when he saw the girl cry.

He loves her sooo much he tells her he loves her to but she should be with god. He wants to be with the angel so asks god to forgive him so he can be in heaven with his loved ones. God agrees but the angel must come back to heaven. So the boy gives her back as a promise that he'll see her again and he'll be in heaven one day and from then on he'll follow God.

Touching..isnt it?


 

© 2009 Raven Dye


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Added on October 12, 2009

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Raven Dye
Raven Dye

Bluefield , WV



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My writing name Raven Dye. I've been threw a lot in my life so far. I'm 16 years young. Im constantly thinking of new poems and stories and most importantly lyrics. Comments are allowable. I dont car.. more..

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A Poem by Raven Dye