Once a love...

this WAS to brett my ex fiance....

His eyes are soft his heart is to
his touch so warm our love so true.
black his hair long and neat
but coverd his face unlabled to greet.
His voice is like a lullibye so gentle and calm
Together so took we'll be in our home

i kiss his lips, he holds me tight
he'll never let me go
No matter how hard the fight

I love this boy and he loves me
and forever and ever
Together well be
And when we old
well love each other the same
even we wont be able to remember each others name

Brett i love you
so very much
my heart skips a beat at ur touch

Im yours forever and youll be mine
Words cant tell you that 
Our love is unable to defind.

 

Reviews

[Dylan I. Cree]

It's sweet and sorry about he being an ex. It has some grammatical errors but I liked it very much.