Before I Die...

This girl is going to die, these are her last wishes and goodbyes.

Before I die, I want to say goodbye.

Goodbye sunlight, and goodbye moonlight.

Goodbye to the wind and the rain,

To the ocean and the trees.

Just one last wish,

All I want is a kiss.

I want to feel the sand beneath my feet, and the wind in my hair,

Just one last time.

But what I want most,

Is one last sniff,

Of a white rose.

Author's Note

I wrote this for a contest, but I like it anyways.

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Very well done

[Carolina Kel]

That's beautiful. Awesome job. :)

[Tears Forgotten]

It simple and nice... great....

[Morning Bliss]

So deep. You can tell that the girl had not lived before until she realized that her time was getting short. I like this poem a lot! :) Good job!