The Phoenix

The Phoenix walks the Earth. 

From death, to rebirth. 

He leaves in a pile of ash, 

And returns in a bright flash. 

He is cursed with the gift of eternal breathing.

His quick, short, painful deaths are always non-succeeding.

The Phoenix walks the Earth, 

From death to rebirth. 

But, he would NEVER complain,

Because a life in vain is a life in pain. 

The Phoenix by Emily Jackson. 

Author's Note

Ignore all the errors that i have made please :)

Reviews

[sammyj]

great job with this

[An owl on the moon]

I immediately thought of beautiful Fawkes... You've given us a dreamish work that conveys not only an ancient image, but a vision of courage... living and dying.. rising again. In light and shadows, life transcends the wonders of the world.

[xjust-for-me.x]

this is great dear. the errors are something we all do. i should know lol. enjoyed this very much. and glad to see you writting here.

[Linear]

well i like this, love the use of colours, it's a really good poem Emily