A VAMPIRES LIFE

Rose is a vampire, her master has kicked her out of the house she has to fend for her self, and deal with humans her own kind and her hunger for blood

I rose from my coffin leaving behind my died dreams, thinking not on the night before that I wasn't given a choice but to run from my master, and so here I am rising ones again alone like so many times before. My heart is acing from my lonely silence but yet I am steal rising from my eternal grave.                                                                                                                                                     What is this, *SCRACH* looking to the right at the door the carton was a red color I mad a choice to us it to cover the door weeks ago it gave me a felling of ease. If someone would move behind it I would see it because the carton would move like a tree branch in a breeze, and it was doing just that. Thinking to my self aah! it's just my eyes playing tricks on me, I'm looking to heard at it and it most be a mouse making a nest in the wall or something like that. I am too jumpy for my own good, so I put my thoughts on something ales. Ah! blood yes I need blood, I walk to the door and open it as wide as it aloud me to, and then I looked out into the dark mist and saw nothing just the pitch blackness I love so dearly. Now I step out into my world of scenes leaving the world of dead dreams behind, I'm lurking about in my head before I even began, it is one way my brain copes with the hunger. I move into the darkness of the ally way leaving all light behind, and any sings of my life. 

         My mind is sit on one mission to hunt, and to satisfy my hunger. but my moment was not long, as I was enjoying the dark thoughts that lurked about in my head, I heard a commotion in the street next to the ally way, and Know my mind's sat on finding out what was causing it, and I did just that. 

      "Hay man whats with the sunglasses?" a small man was standing next to a streetlight trying to make out a shadowy figure that was standing above him without luck. Within a few seconds all I can even make out was a glare from what the smaller man thought were sunglasses, but I knew better. 

      

      Then all I can hear and see was a loud boom! and flashes of red and white. I couldn't believe it and then I saw the small man lying on the ground, I just stood there waiting for something to happen, and nothing. I was going to just move on but my scenes told me I should stay where I was. Now the shadowy figure was watching me, I look to my side to find tow dark brown eyes peering at me through the dark. 

      "Why are you just standing there you fool?" I ask him 

he just looks at me for a moment and then he leans forward and says 

      "You know I think I'm just board"

      "I knew it was you" I said with a snare "Have you been following me?" 

      "Hahahahaha! you wish sweetheart" 

That's my master for you always the one to laugh at me because I knew something but steal had to ask.    

      "Were are you going Rose?" He asked as if he didn't know

      "Why would I tell you anything after you through me out of the house a few days ago"

He pushed him self off the wall and stepped closer to me where I could see his eyes more clearly, and said 

     "I think you have learned your lesson and you need to come back to me know" 

I looked at him for along moment thinking 

    "Will s**t he could have waited tell I got done feeding, but know he had to act like an a*s and bring it up before I even got to the street" 

and with my eyes dead on his I said with a very stern voice "NO!"  

He looked abet shocked as he moved to the other side of me, and took my hand 

     "and why not?" 

he had his puppy eyes looking down at me, I took my hand away from his and said  

    "because you don't care in less it benefits you and I am not going to play your stupid games" 

and with that I start to walk away. 

     "O no sweetheart your going nowhere!" 

in that moment I felt a sting on the back of my head and a warm flow of heat going down my spine, I fell to my knees to find he had struck me with his fist on the back of my head very heard and slowly I passed out. 

                                                  To be continued      

Author's Note

I have a problem with spelling so if you see any do forgive me.

Reviews

[Jeff Boothe]

The imagery is good and it is a good start. I think you are off to a good start. The best start is to just get your story written out. However messy it my be. Steven King said in his book on writing, 'just get it on paper, there will be time to fix it later". - paraphrasing here.

Since you have divulged you problem with spelling (as I do, from time to time) you might want to have someone here or at home proof read for you. My son (also a writer) tells me to read it aloud. He says it helps him. I can't seem to do it though.

Also gather friends and join groups so you have more readers to pull from. You will get rough reviews but sometimes they are what we need.

I only wish to help not hinder your writing. I was stiffled by other peoples opinions early on and it took me decades to get back to writing. So keep writing.

[Mandy]

Thank you hun and any reviews are good they help me to do a better job later and to correct my work, and I love Steven King he is a great writer. I will also see if I can get someone to proof read my work for me it would help.
Thank you ones again :)