The One

The One

Is it for me

a he or a she?

 

Does she have brown hair

blonde hair

even pink?

 

Does he have bulging muscles

A swimmers body

or even a beer gut?

 

What am I to expect

of the One?

Is the One even real?

Reviews

[Annette Jay Sweeney]

I enjoyed this poem, but I feel you have a lot more to express. Pull harder, deeper. Really tug at the pain you have, maybe the confusion over which sex it would be? I really enjoy your style, with emphasis on the form. This is a nice short poem.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i love this ... its the question i ask myself all the time "Is the One even real?" love this piece

[Eloise]

I remember that feeling, I still have that constant fear everyday. If you don't worry too much someone will come along your way.

[Bette]

yes the one is real. it sounds like you torn between other things lol. Good luck with that.:) great poem.