What it makes us

What it makes us

A Poem by untoldtruth
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Jealousy is a b***h isn't it?

It just pops out of nowhere

Where does it resonate?

Maybe there's some dark place inside of us

Where jealousy hides

 

Then we se someone with a better life

and we want that

We want it so bad

So jealousy comes out

We let it take control of us

Let it make fun of that person

Trip her when she's walking by

Plant some rumors

 

Do we feel any remorse

Or is the jealousy so powerful

that it makes us into a narcissist?

Not a care for others.

 

 

© 2010 untoldtruth


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This is so true of this feeling. I love the flow and the images this poem plants in the mind. You wrote on a feeling that we all feel at one time or another and for different reasons.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is so true, i agree with you. excelkent write

Posted 14 Years Ago



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