Secret

Secret

A Poem by untoldtruth
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Why?

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So you know my secret

I guess you’re having the time of your life

Making fun of me every chance you get

Letting parts of my secret slip in to every remark you make

For the whole world to hear

 

Does it make you feel good to hurt me?

Why is it I that you hate?

What have I ever done to you?

© 2010 untoldtruth


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very strong...i can really feel your pain, which i'm sorry about. if you need to vent i'll listen. i know what its like to have your secret spilled.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A strong and to the point poem. Some people in a life need no time or space in your life. It is your life. Not their life. A good ending to a poem about disappointment in some people who need to be slience.
Coyote

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome and what really is your secret? HMM!!! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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