Nobody knows

A song

Nobody Knows

 

 You have lost me, and you don’t even know;

You broke my heart and left me out in the cold.

What cruel joke is this-

That nobody knows it but me?

 

Day by day I’ve been puttin’ on a show

Hiding the pain so that nobody knows

Now I’m dyin’ inside

And nobody knows it but me.

 

Why can’t I say the things I need to say?

Why can’t I just leave you today?

I hate you so,

And nobody knows it but me.

 

I remember when I was so wild and free

My heart belonged to none other but me

Now I’m broken inside

And nobody knows it but me.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

4/4 time

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I agree with the other reviewers. A nice poem indeed.

[Revery]

This poem articulates well the isolation in tragedy and the want for something other than limbo. It takes the reader in and shows them vividly the intensity of the situation. I don't want to assume this is you and hope not. Excellent composition and expression.

[Maryum Mazhar]

Awesome :)))
This describes something pretty much everyone goes through sometime or another.

Btw thanks so much for the review, and for being honest in it.
Thumbs up and good luck!!

[Max]

Personally I know how this feels and I feel that you have expressed it in words beautifully.

[Judas Hammer]

very cool. very emotional. I felt you. Once I feel. I ike. Loved the piece. You didnt waste words. Great work

[ErinLovesYou<3]

I can really feel your pain in this work. I can also relate, I know how it feels, personally. Great job though!

[Helpless]

i would love to hear music put to this, it will probably be even more enchanting- if thats even possible! i love it!

[Bone and Brine]

So sad, but beautiful! Well written.

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sad write, but well expressed.