Stars

This was a poem I wrote a few months ago for my love <3

So many stars tonight

Giving us kisses of light

All the way from the Galaxy

Down to the ones in your eyes

Smiling down at me

A blessed feeling to have

When a star falling

Catches your eye

And on that night

That I still remember

Standing with you

In the cold

The excitement of watching it fall

As you whispered the magic words for a wish

I saw my first shooting star with you...

Reviews

[Lazy Dragon]

So cute! This was very sweet.

[Eli Blayze]

That was cute(:! And a very gorgeous sight to see. Keep up the good work(:

[E.J.Byrnes]

Absolutely gorgeous. I felt as if I was actually there. Nice work, kudos!