Sweet Prince

Sweet Prince

A Poem by ShadowWalker

I have a little problem

It cuts me deep inside

It's a very sensitive issue

A simple truth i can't abide


My son was only three years old When last i saw his face

Sometimes i wish i could give up, Vanish without a trace


However that can never be

I won't give her the satisfaction

The way i feel, she can never see

I curse my own inaction


If i Could have one simple wish

My thoughts i would evince

Kiss him lightly on his head and say........ 


Goodnight sweet prince

© 2012 ShadowWalker


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Yes, this is a sad poem that is filled with much emotion within.
Than you for writing this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was a sad and short poem, but filled to the brim with emotion. You definitely can express alot of anguish and pain in this.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is really sad but you write it so lovely, and in such a short poem you can express a lot of what you're feeling..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Poignant write.Deeply moving.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Probably the sadest thing to have so much love and never get to express it, I hope you are reunited with your son and if that is not possible I pray you find peace with the words you leave here in our care instead.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! It's so beautiful. Short and lovely. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


such a deep touching poem... :(

Posted 12 Years Ago


An honest, well penned poem.
Great flow and rhyme.

I understand this thought, completely.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very deep, emotionally... and is written very beautifully. Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


so tragic ..so sad.. but nicely written! Very touching!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 10, 2012
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ShadowWalker
ShadowWalker

Scotland, United Kingdom



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Writer, Philosopher, All round lost cause The truth is Freewill is an illusion, every choice you think you make is nothing more than another step along a predestined path that only has one destina.. more..

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