Your prologue drove me insane, I saw that they mentioned the editing but I am such an English grammar nazi person that it makes me crazy, so I'll mention it as well, buddy boyo you got mistakes haha, easy fixable ones at that. As for the context, very intriguing hooked me instantly and I usually don't read stuff that start with a date but I made an exception and I'm glad I did :). Chapter 1, yes b***h girl needs to go down, its all about that revenge. I'm liking it; I'm intrigued. Please continue :)
Writer, Philosopher, All round lost cause
The truth is Freewill is an illusion, every choice you think you make is nothing more than another step along a predestined path that only has one destina.. more..