Chapter 2 - Marie Comes BackA Chapter by Valentine KingMarie is drawn back to her old town for reasons she can't explain. When her car breaks down, she's trapped in the dark with something watching her through the trees.Marie Summers was the first
to come back. She drove with the window open, the icy wind blasting into the
car was the only thing keeping her sagging eyelids from closing completely. The
adrenaline that had been coursing through her system when she left the city had
long since drained away, leaving her bereft of energy. Her arms drooped down
from the steering wheel, looking to the few passing motorists as if she was
already asleep. A sign flashed up,
illuminated by the glare of her headlights. Services 20 miles. Glancing down at
her empty coffee cup she weighed up the chances of falling asleep against
stopping and risking someone recognising her. She told herself she was being
paranoid. There was no chance of someone at a random services knowing her, not
when she'd already put more than 300 miles between her and the mess she'd left
behind. The miles continued to slip
by and her eyelids sagged further, finally closing, just for a second but long
enough to send the car slewing at an angle towards the central barrier. A truck
blared its horn as it tore past the inside of her and she jerked awake, heart
pounding as she realised what had nearly happened. As she swerved back over to
the inside lane, she leaned out the open window and gulped in deep breaths of
the frozen air. Another sign whipped past. Services 5 miles. She'd only ever driven this
far once before and that was in the other direction. On the day she'd bought
her first car she'd raced out of her home town, vowing never to return. Yet
here she was, heading back again. When she'd left him there, blood draining out
of him, she'd had no clear idea where to go. She only knew she wanted to get
out. But as she'd driven out of the city, taking one turn after another without
thinking where she was headed, somehow she'd ended up here, back in Yorkshire
for the first time in fifteen years. Even if he had survived, he'd
never find her here. She'd been careful enough to never speak of her past,
never to use her real name. At first she was worried if he knew, he'd call her
parents and she’d be forced to move back in with them. But later, when she knew
him better, she had a very different reason for keeping quiet about who she
really was. Was he still alive? She
hoped not but there was a nagging feeling in her head that he might already be
in his car, leg bound in a makeshift bandage, mind filled with all the things
he would do to her when he caught up, how she'd end up just like Ollie. She yawned loudly as the
slip road came into view. She considered driving on but another huge yawn
convinced her to turn the steering wheel to the side and then she was off up
the hill into the brightly lit car park. Turning off the engine she climbed out
into the freezing wind, walking quickly across the empty tarmac and up the ramp
to the automatic door. The cold of the winter's night brought goose bumps out
on her legs and she cursed herself for not having the foresight to bring a
change of clothes with her. A skirt without tights was no fun in weather like
this but she'd had her reasons for her choice of clothes. Besides after tonight
she planned to burn them anyway. Half the building seemed
closed for the night when she walked in, the shop was roped off, the arcade
machines too. Chairs were on top of the tables in most of the restaurant, just
a few seats left occupied. She looked at her watch, 3.35 am. No wonder the
shutters were down on the fast food joints. She found herself marvelling at the
bearded man tucking into an enormous fried meal. What would a meal like that do
to her after starving herself for so long to please him, needing to ensure no
hint of a tummy appeared when he ran his hand over her tensed up flesh, knowing
how angry he got if she showed any signs of weight gain. It meant a life of
constant hunger but that had been a small price to pay to keep him happy and
keep her injuries to a minimum. A few people were sat at
other tables, all nursing steaming drinks. The bored teenager behind the
restaurant counter looked up momentarily as she passed before turning his
attention back to his phone. Pushing the door to the
ladies, Marie went inside and looked at herself in the mirror. Could you tell?
She did look tired but there were no obvious tell-tale signs of what she'd
done. She'd been sure to wipe the blood splatters from her face before she'd
left the city. She dug a hairbrush out of her handbag and ran it through her
hair, teasing out the knots. The fear that had subsided as she'd driven away
had returned with a vengeance now she was out of the car. She felt exposed,
vulnerable, as if he was about to burst out from the stall behind her, arms
outstretched, trousers already undone, fists clenched ready to punish her for
what she'd done no matter how loud she screamed. She had to fight the sudden
urge to run back to the car. You've stopped now. At least get a coffee. What's
the point of going through all that just to fall asleep and die at the wheel?
You might as well have let him kill you after all. Walking back out of the
ladies she bumped into a man in a smart suit rushing for the gents, his head
topped by a shock of white hair. Panic raced through her as she was suddenly
convinced it was him. Just relax. It's not him. You left him tied to a chair
bleeding to death. He'd have to be f*****g Houdini to get free and get here
now. Just calm down. She felt eyes on her and
looked up to see the teenager in the restaurant grinning inanely at her,
raising his eyebrows as he stared at her bare legs. Christ, don't try to come on
to me. She walked over to him feeling strangely uncoordinated as if her feet
had been replaced by lead weights that threatened to drag her to the floor at
any moment. You're exhausted. Not far now, then you can rest. "Can I get a coffee to
go?" "Are you all right? You
look a bit-" "I'm fine," she
snapped. "Just get me a coffee.” He blinked, but didn't
argue, well used to tired and angry drivers taking out their road rage on him.
"What type?" Calm down. You don't want
him to remember you. Just act normal. "Black, no sugar." Whilst he was rummaging
under the counter for a takeaway cup Marie looked round the restaurant. What
was going on in all these people's lives to bring them here at " she glanced at
her watch " nearly four in the morning? The guy sat by the rack full
of wilting leaflets, what was his story? Tall, black hair hint of stubble. He
looked like someone she used to know, leaning on his elbows like that, staring
at his mug. The entire time she looked at him, he didn't move, not to take a
sip or to look round, nothing. Was he running away from something too? The miserable couple on the
next table. She was reapplying lipstick whilst he read a magazine, was that
what marriage meant? Twilight years spent not even bothering to talk to each
other? The bearded guy had finished
his fry up and had his feet up on the chair opposite, picking his teeth with
the end of his fork whilst his other hand dug into his earlobe as trying to
scratch an itch somewhere on his brain stem. "That'll be 2.95." Marie paid and picked up her
coffee. "Thanks." As she passed leaflet guy he moved so suddenly it
drew her attention, scraping back his chair with a jolt and standing up, his
eyes falling on Marie as she looked his way, locking gazes. She felt incredibly
sorry for him, he looked so unhappy. Part of her, the part that she'd had to
keep hidden for years, wanted to run over and give him a hug. The bigger part,
the part that had kept her alive this long wanted only to leave. She managed a
smile and he responded, nodding at her as she waited for the automatic door to
slide open. The blast of wind that hit
as she stepped outside took her attention away from the stranger. She hunched
her shoulders against the cold, half jogged back to her car, feeling more and
more certain she knew him from somewhere. But where? She climbed into the car and
started the engine, taking a sip of the worst coffee she'd ever tasted,
clicking her seatbelt in place and yawning loudly. She felt a pressure headache
building behind her eyes as she drove slowly back out onto the motorway.
Perfect. She'd finished her coffee by
the time she pulled off onto smaller roads, awful as it was at least it had
kept her awake. She was back in the area she knew well even after all this
time. She thought about her first tentative driving lessons round here, Gerald
with his succession of hideous knitted jumpers sliding his hand
"accidentally" onto her knee as he showed her how to change gear,
positioning his mirror so he could stare indirectly at her chest. He was the
only instructor she could afford though and without him she might never have
got her licence, left the stifling air of home for the city, cesspit of
humanity that it turned out to be anyway. She thought about the life
she'd expected to lead in London, high flying executive, prove her teachers
wrong. Then she thought about what had actually happened. Living on the streets
for the first six months before discovering how much money she could make with
her body. There was that chance encounter with him that had led to the life of
the kept woman. Everything had been paid for, rent, bills, food, clothes. But
boy did she pay handsomely for what he did for her, scars on her body and deeper
wounds across her soul, raw cuts that would never heal, not after what she'd
seen. Without warning she began to
cry, stinging tears that blurred her vision as her chest hitched and she sobbed
without control, barely able to see the passing sign. Seaford 10 miles. Maybe if she'd failed her
driving test, she'd still be living there. Maybe if she'd told Gerald to keep
his wandering fingers to himself she’d have been around to say bye to mum and
dad before they died. Maybe they'd still be here too instead of dying of carbon
monoxide poisoning from their ancient lounge heater. Or maybe she'd have slept
into death beside them, slumped in front of the TV. She hadn't even been able
to afford the petrol to get to the funeral. She wondered if the house
had been sold, who was living there now. Maybe it was just locked up and she'd
move back in like she'd never been away. She hit the brakes, easing
into the next bend, her old knowledge of these roads coming back to her as if
she'd been down here only yesterday. Wiping her eyes with the back of her hand
she spotted the sign on her left. Cowforth 2 miles. An image came into her mind.
Daniel Tierney. He'd lived at Bowbridge Farm just outside Cowforth. Maybe he
was still there. The two of them in the layby just up that road on the right.
Him fumbling his way up her jumper, throwing her out of his dad's car when she
refused to let him go any further, left to walk the four miles to the nearest
phone box to call her parents and ask to be picked up again. Their lecture had
been harder to deal with than Daniel's advances. "You're 14 Marie, what
were you doing in a car with a 25 year old?" Her responses only made them
angrier. It was never the guy's fault, always hers for leading them on,
dressing too provocatively, drinking too much. All she ever wanted was a hug
from them, to be told it would be okay, that they still loved her. It never
happened. The road curved to the right
and as she swung round the bend a shrill beep came from the dashboard. She
looked down, something had lit up bright red. A weird symbol. That can't be
good. Red is never good. Just hang on, we're nearly there. There was a thump from the
engine, a thwack, thwack noise and then it died, the car rolling slowly to a
halt as Marie gripped the wheel tightly, the power steering gone. It bumped up
onto the verge, back end sticking out into the road as she punched the
dashboard. That's just great.
Fantastic. She turned the key in the ignition but nothing happened. The
headlights flickered, dimmed then came back to life. Climbing out of the car,
Marie gasped as the wind whipped past. Her hands shook with cold as she lifted
the bonnet and looked underneath. In the darkness it was hard enough just to
see the engine let alone what might be wrong with it. You turn the key, the car
goes, what more does anyone need to know? Why couldn't you have lasted a few
more miles you piece of s**t? She reached for her phone
then remembered. No simcard. Well done, you really thought this through,
snapping it in half and throwing the pieces out the window as you left the
city. She'd read somewhere that you could ring 999 even if your phone had no
sim but that last thing she wanted was a policeman turning up and asking
questions. He'd often mentioned his links to the force as if it was something
out of Star Wars. At first she'd been impressed, especially when he made her
first speeding ticket disappear but now the thought of a police car worried her
enough to ratchet her headache up a few more notches. Slamming the bonnet shut she
climbed back in and flicked on her hazard lights, slumping back in the seat and
trying to think through the thick fog of headache induced nausea and tiredness.
She'd gone past the Cornforth sign so there was probably no more than six miles
to go. Walk it? See if Metcalfe's garage is still in business, get it towed in
the morning. But six miles is a long way in the dark with no footpath and no
guarantee the only garage there'd been in Seaford was still in business. The
phone box in Cowforth? Walk back to that? Same problem, a long way in the
freezing cold with no coat and who was she going to ring anyway? She heard the sound of a car
approaching. A pair of headlights appeared from round the bend behind her,
reflecting in her wing mirror as she wound down the window but by the time
she'd begun to wave for them to stop they were gone, swerving round her car and
disappearing into the night. Shivering, she wound the
window back up and pulled a blanket through from the back seat, wrapping it
round her legs and tucking it underneath her. She glanced to her left and
caught a glimpse of something through the hedgerow. It was hard to tell what it
was in the darkness but something was out there. The rational part of her
brain said it was nothing, maybe a deer. But the child in her remembered what
growing up in Seaford had been like and it told her to be careful, that it
might be something else, something she didn't want anything to do with. Flicking the door lock she
tried to think, huddled in her blanket with her feet on the seat and her knees
under her chin, squinting out past the flashing orange glow of the hazard
lights. There it was again. The blackness had taken on an even darker shade as
something darted from left to right, right to left, getting closer but keeping
to the shadows. Just a deer, just a deer.
Yeah right. You know who it is and you know why he's here. Run, run like f**k
while you can. Get out of the car and run now! But where? How many horror
films start with the big boobed woman in a miniskirt jiggling her way through
the darkness only to be picked off by the psycho with the pickaxe? She was frozen in her seat,
unable to shake the feeling that any second now the door would be wrenched open
and she'd be dragged out. There was a clunk from
behind her and she swung her head round, breath coming hard and ragged as her
heart threatened to burst from her chest. That was him punching the boot. I
know it was. No, it was just a branch falling in the wind. There's no one out
there. He'd be about 80 now if he's even still alive which he isn't. Of course
he's alive. He's alive and he's here. The shadow moved round the back of the
car as the headlights flickered and died, leaving just the hazards flashing on
and off, on and off. The seconds passing as she clenched her fists, not
noticing the pain as her nails dug into her palms hard enough to draw blood. "No, no, no. Please
come back on." The orange lights flashed. For a moment the outline of a
person was visible by the nearside rear passenger door. She held her breath as
the handle was lifted and rattled. You should have run. The whole car shook as
the handle was rattled again. The light died and the shadow moved. Now it was
by her window. Another flash of orange and then she saw him. And that was when
she began to scream. © 2014 Valentine King |
StatsAuthorValentine KingUnited KingdomAboutI'm a horror writer based in the UK with four collections and a novella available on Amazon, one of which has reached the No1 spot in the UK. more..Writing
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