"Inbetween"

"Inbetween"

 

        Love...

Flows like a

        River.

Beginning in...

        Obscurity,

Ending in...

       A mad rush

to the sea;

       And inbetween...

Lies...

       Heaven...

Valentine

Reviews

[Lorry]

So that's why I'm always in a rush, I'm only about a quarter mile from the Clyde :)

[Valentine]

Nemo, rivers are for transporting goods and of course for fishing. I just love the sound of them. Kathie

[Paul Bell]

The rush to love, that island in the sun.
Hopefully for most, stays that way.

[D Connolly]

What I love about water is that much like love, it has a path, it is constant yet ever changing, and powerful

[Ted Kniffen]

Well said, Kathie. Love is like a river that has a beginning and unfortunately an ending when it spills into the sea. Good write

[Valentine]

Thank you Ted for stopping by to read my scribble. Kathie

[wordman]

like peanut butter and jelly

[Valentine]

Ron, thank you for another smile to brighten my day. Kathie

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhhhhhh so sublime ..wonderful wisdom ..the journey "Inbetween" all positive and love filled ..what a fine little poem Kathie! very fine ...
E.
ps. i like the form!!!! :)

[Valentine]

Einstein, like I tell everyone, I am not a studied writer of prose I just inherited the rhyming gift from my mother. She was the original Valentine as her birthday was Valentine's Day. I have some of her writing but not all. My brothers grabbed that up over the years as I was living in another state. If I put one of hers on I will not take credit from her. Her writing was about family mostly and of course love. She was a romantic. Kathie

[Einstein Noodle]

well . is this one of hers then? i am confused ;}

[Valentine]

No, If I was to ever put something on of hers I would say it was her writing. Kathie

[Cassie]

This is very brilliant. Goes to my library

[Valentine]

Thank you Cassie you flatter me. Kathie

[SmittyJas]

Intimately written ebbs and tides plus heaven.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

If only we could stop to appreciate it, well done, good read.

[Coyote Poetry]

My dear Poet. You have described love perfectly.
"And inbetween...
Lies...
Heaven..."
The poem is outstanding. Thank you for sharing your work.
Coyote

[Valentine]

After a violent mistake in life, I was blessed to find the real thing..Kathie

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad. A amazing poem.