"Inbetween"

"Inbetween"

A Poem by Valentine

"Inbetween"

 
        Love...
Flows like a
        River.
Beginning in...
        Obscurity,
Ending in...
       A mad rush
to the sea;
       And inbetween...
Lies...
       Heaven...

Valentine

© 2009 Valentine


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So that's why I'm always in a rush, I'm only about a quarter mile from the Clyde :)


Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

Nemo, rivers are for transporting goods and of course for fishing. I just love the sound of them. K.. read more
The rush to love, that island in the sun.
Hopefully for most, stays that way.

Posted 8 Years Ago


What I love about water is that much like love, it has a path, it is constant yet ever changing, and powerful

Posted 8 Years Ago


Well said, Kathie. Love is like a river that has a beginning and unfortunately an ending when it spills into the sea. Good write

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

Thank you Ted for stopping by to read my scribble. Kathie
like peanut butter and jelly

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

Ron, thank you for another smile to brighten my day. Kathie
ohhhhhhh so sublime ..wonderful wisdom ..the journey "Inbetween" all positive and love filled ..what a fine little poem Kathie! very fine ...
E.
ps. i like the form!!!! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

Einstein, like I tell everyone, I am not a studied writer of prose I just inherited the rhyming gift.. read more
Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

well . is this one of hers then? i am confused ;}
Valentine

8 Years Ago

No, If I was to ever put something on of hers I would say it was her writing. Kathie
This is very brilliant. Goes to my library

Posted 8 Years Ago


Valentine

8 Years Ago

Thank you Cassie you flatter me. Kathie
Intimately written ebbs and tides plus heaven.

Posted 10 Years Ago


If only we could stop to appreciate it, well done, good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


My dear Poet. You have described love perfectly.
"And inbetween...
Lies...
Heaven..."
The poem is outstanding. Thank you for sharing your work.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Valentine

10 Years Ago

After a violent mistake in life, I was blessed to find the real thing..Kathie
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

I'm glad. A amazing poem.

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Added on November 18, 2009

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