"One Small Reminder"

"One Small Reminder"

A Poem by Valentine
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For the magic of Merlin and all of the sweet memories..

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   "One Small Reminder"

 
Memory...please stay...
His face, do not take away.
It is all that remains...
Of a love...not gained.
Please...leave behind
A small memory...
To last through life
And satisfy me.
Please...never take
His face away.
In my memories...
Let it forever stay.
 
{God knows I
still love you and
always will}
 
  Valentine

© 2009 Valentine


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Beautiful song of longing and remembrance..


Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Songs do not play well with heartache. Kathie
Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

But they always touch the listeners..
An attachment with love is an unbreakable one.

Insight.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Yes, love lasts even after God takes them Home. Kathie
Powerful and true emotion in these words.
"Please...never take
His face away.
In my memories...
Let it forever stay."
I understand this wish. Thank you dear friend for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Thank you John. You have led an amazing life my friend. Kathie
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I hope I have a few more years left. Now the old man must watch his kids become strong and learn to .. read more
The images of love that stay with us forever, how they hold us in the space of eternity and bring happiness us happiness.

I hope his face does stay in those memories forever to brighten your days. This is a very touching tribute, and a very honest wish. It is beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A forever love etched into the minds eye forever. Touching, well written

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great love expressed in this poem, excellent!

Posted 13 Years Ago


a nice and poignant prayer one that I shall remember when I pray while thinking on my belove'd

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awwww. So sweet. I love it! Great write!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


One of the fears of advancing age is that we will eventually, through alzheimers, lose all memory of loved ones. I watched this happen to my own mother, who progressively forgot my sister, my brother and I, and then my father. How devastating a thing it is to live a life, and then not be able to remember any of it? You poem is poignant and very apt in this day and age.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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