"Would You?"

 

  "Would You ?"

 

If I crawled inside...

Would you keep me warm;

Wrap and hold me close,

Keep me safe from harm?

 

Could I snuggle tightly...

To your broad chest;

Lay...my weary head,

While I find...eternal rest?

 

If I crawled inside...

Would you hold me tight;

Chase away all fears...

Free my darkest...nights?

 

If I held out my heart...

And soul...to you...

Would you flee or stay;

Just what would you do?

     Valentine

 

 

 

Reviews

[R Smith]

and therein lies the question, 'what would you do'? if he has sense he'd say yes to it all, another great work from you Kathie, i love the flow of it, its a delight to read :)

[Leslie Philibert]

What I like here is the use of rhetorical questions ; well written !

[Valentine]

Life is full of questions...many unanswered. Kathie

[armin]

beautiful write, I enjoyed the read.

Spidey ....

[Valentine]

Thank you for the kind words. Kathie

[Lizardo]

Such a great poem with many question that only love can answer
Great piece of poetry you have here!

[Valentine]

Thank you for taking the time to read my write. Kathie

[DoormanDan]

A very beautiful write indeed. This is possibly a question that many lovers want to ask the ones they love, but they might not ask because they are afraid of what the answer might be. You've done fantastically once again :)

[Valentine]

Thank you Dan for reading my scribble. Kathie

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Intriguing and beautiful, well done, great read.

[Valentine]

Thank you Thomas. Kathie

[~]

This is a darling piece, asking for warmth and love.

[Valentine]

Thank you very much. Kathie

[Jamestown]

Beautiful write, those are the questions we all want to know leading
in to a relationship, thanks for sharing.

[Valentine]

Just an old write from a sentimental soul, Kathie

[Tiana]

Such a beautiful poem, Valentine ... The heart speaks in search of answers ...

[Valentine]

I wrote this some time ago. Kathie

[Chris]

as a poem to find... it reads soft and wishful... as a hand-written poem being given - it really would speak... but god alone knows its answer...

[Valentine]

Thank you Chris. Kathie