"Come Inside"

 

 

  "Come Inside"

 

Come inside, 

Keep me warm,

Show my soul

Why it was born.

 

Wake up

My sleeping soul;

Touch my heaart...

Make me whole.

 

Enlighten me

Where I abide;

Touch my heart,

Come on inside.

 

Do not depart,

I was asleep...

Til you appeared...

My soul did weep.

 

For many years,

Alone inside...

Come awaken me,

With me abide.

 

Keep me warm,

Away from hell;

Where death...

And pain dwell.

 

Come inside,

Keep me warm;

With me abide

Both safe from harm.

 

Valentine 

Reviews

[Ruth]

A beautiful heartfelt tone that makes the reader sense the need of comfort, moving Valentine...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most descriptive and valuable piece that lends to the hands that comfort us, well done, good read.

[richieb]

Valentine.
Your beautiful poem reads to me an invitation to Christ to enter our hearts. We will receive his warmth, peace, safety and wholesomeness. Well written, gentle and sincere.
Richie b.

[Einstein Noodle]

blessed by this prayer/poem ...spiritualists can toil a whole lifetime only to find that Truth has been tapping on the shoulder ever so gently ...saying "turn around ...just ask" ... it is too simple for us in all our complications right!? ;)
your poem also read well as one longing for love and a partner ... but i like it as a prayer
E.

[Sami Khalil]

I know you abide in love and the power wholeness. Departing can be painful especially when it awakens our lonesome pains. God bless...:)..............

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, beautiful and good words for love and need dear friend.
"Come inside,
Keep me warm;
With me abide
Both safe from harm."
I liked the above lines. We need this place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

a nice warm poem, a lovely welcome message. nice work kathie.

[Celie Rose]

Such a beautiful poem.
I like the ending stanza.
"Come inside,
Keep me warm;
With me abide
Both safe from harm."
Well written and expressed.
Keep up the fine writing.

[wordman]

beautiful thoughts,come and make me alive again

[Valentine]

Hi Ron, slowly coming back to computer life. Hope all is well with you. Kathie