"Love's Choices"

         "Love's Choices"

 

His inner mind scales the mountain tops

In a dream of valor that does not stop.

He rides the rapids and swims the sea,

Invents fantasy miracles that will never be.

He dwells in Heaven in the safety of her arms

Loved and worry-free from all harm.

Her treasures offered more than any schemes,

He stays with both her and his dreams.

For his inner mind scales mountains galore

But remains chained, for he loved her more.

   

     Written by  Valentine

             [under copyright]

 

Reviews

[Greg the Bard]

This is the Val I have read in the past. The image of seperats as one. True love is the joining of souls and you work is a true view of just such joining. Beautiful!

[Wildecat]

Love is definitley about choices and each of us must make our own. Nice write.

[David Lewis Paget]

A fine ideal, but probably not very healthy for a relationship. If one has to choose between fulfillment in other areas, and the love of a partner, I should imagine that would breed frustration and possibly resentment over a period of time. It could end up self-defeating.

[Jessica M.]

giving up your own dreams to be with someone else
yearning to do other things yet completely consumed in where you are.
very understandable.
nice write.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"He loved her more..." just great sweet stuff. Terriffic.